Doomsday Rider III: Zing-Lau's Revenge - Part Three
Previously, on Doomsday Rider III, Rider met Usul2cuteforU, a blue Usul,
whom he has a crush on. Also, Gemini, Zing-Lau's minion, was mutilated at the
Bloodsport arena. Zing-Lau's plan might be falling apart, which means he might
be more vulnerable.
"How can this be?!" Zing-Lau shouted, gripping his head. "My plan is perfect!
"Master Zing-Lau, calm down," Mechanicore said. "Everybody is defeated some
"I suppose you're right, Mechanicore. Besides, Gemini was a weakling compared
to Achinarak. He is the perfect choice for any conquest. After all, he's had
so much experience. My father was not able to control him, but I will be able
to," Zing-Lau said, as he walked over to a window, and stared out of it. "I
will not be defeated again."
Back at Neopia Central...
I sat up in my bed, got up, and looked out my window. I was ready
to storm Zing-Lau's base, but I couldn't do much without my friends. They'd
always helped defeat the bad guy. They helped defeat Scorpio, Armos, Orbiknaught,
Spectre, Toro, Skull Ptero, Mechanicore, ShenDogg, The Unborn Beast, and even
Zing-Lau himself. There was now way i'd be able to even defend myself against
Zing-Lau, whose stats had returned to normal after we defeated him.
"Rider, is something wrong?" Yugo asked as he stepped into my
"Nothing's wrong, Yugo. Except the fact that Zing-Lau is still alive," I told
him. He always listened to me, no matter what I had to say.
"Well, Rider, I know how you can get to Zing-Lau's base without being found
until you get there," Yugo said, sitting down on my bed.
"How?" I asked him.
"Have you ever heard of the Cloud Temple?" Yugo asked me.
"Uh... I think so. Isn't that the place where Scorpio and Armos' base was
positioned when we beat them?" I asked.
"Yes, that's the Cloud Temple. You might want to watch out though, I heard
that the Cloud Temple has been overrun with warlocks lately," Yugo told me.
"I'll watch out," I told him. "So how do I get there?"
"There should be a whirlwind somewhere in Sakhmet Palace, it should lift you
high enough to glide to the Cloud Temple," Yugo told me.
"Thanks, Yugo. I'll get the others, and we'll go to the Cloud Temple," I said,
running out the door carrying the Jadestone and my Million Degree Sword with
At Sakhmet Palace...
"Okay guys, this is it," I said, grabbing on to Kentan.
Anubis shape-shifted into a copy of Skull Ptero, and grabbed Chao, Evanda, and
Boomdogg. Tical was going to carry the Jadestone. I stepped into the whirlwind
with Kentan in my hand, and we started to go up. The whirlwind shot me out,
and I began to glide. Tical did the same, and Anubis just flew there.
When we got to the Cloud Temple, Anubis dropped everybody off,
and returned to his standard form. When I landed, I set Kentan down. When Tical
landed, she handed me the Jadestone.
"Is everybody here?" I asked.
"Yes," everybody answered.
"Okay," I said.
"Rider, look out!" Anubis shouted. I wheeled around only to meet a fireball
slamming into my face.
"So, you thought you could storm my base? Well, I'm afraid not," Zing-Lau
said, picking up the Jadestone. "This is just what I need for my sceptre." Zing-Lau
snapped his fingers, and his floating chair shot out of nowhere. "You fools
will have to do much better in order to defeat me again." He sat down in the
chair, and it began to float up. "Now, if you'll excuse me, I've got a planet
to conquer." Zing-Lau and his chair vanished, and none of us could follow him.
"Great. Now he's got the Jadestone. I think we've lost now," I said, staring
down at the ground.
"Rider," Boomdogg said, walking toward me. "You've always done your best,
you've always helped us out when we needed you, and I'm not going to let you
give up. Not when we're so close to Zing-Lau we could practically spit on him.
I don't care if you drop out of the fight, but you're going with us, no matter
what you do, no matter what you say, I'm going to make sure you don't give up."
"You're right," I said, looking up. "I'm staying in this struggle, even if
it kills me."
"That's the spirit!" Chao said, swatting me on the back. I glared up at him
"Now let's go destroy Zing-Lau!" I shouted.
Inside Zing-Lau's base...
"Well, ShenDogg, they're drawing nearer. It's almost time for
the final rush. Once they get here, I'm going to awaken Achinarak. And then,
Neopia will be ours!"
"Well, master, here they come," ShenDogg said, turning to face the doorway.
He jumped into the ring, and prepared for a fight. "If you're going to battle
us, you have to defeat me first," ShenDogg told us. Boomdogg decided he
was going to be the first one to step up, and he did. Immediately, the two Lupes
fought just as ferociously as they did before. But Boomdogg had been training
again, and had the upper hand, because ShenDogg's stats weren't fully recovered.
"Give it up, ShenDogg!" Boomdogg said, punching ShenDogg in the nose. Some
of ShenDogg's cuts started to flow. They both threw a punch, and their fists
collided. Then they started a grapple with their other hands, and tried to push
each other back. Boomdogg started to push ShenDogg back, and then vice versa.
The two couldn't push each other very far back. I could tell they were both
trying their hardest to win the grapple, and then Boomdogg slammed his knee
into ShenDogg's chest. ShenDogg left the grapple, and took a few steps back.
There was a little bit of gore flowing from his mouth. ShenDogg's HP was really
low, and I think he was becoming afraid of what Boomdogg could do now.
"Impossible!" ShenDogg shouted. "There's no way you could be stronger than
me now!" ShenDogg said, wiping the gore away from his mouth and nose. Boomdogg
rushed ShenDogg, and slammed his knee into ShenDogg's forehead. The collision
was so extreme, ShenDogg was launched out of the ring, and into the surrounding
lava, where he sank until he was completely enveloped, and we all knew he was
Nobody knew what to say. All Boomdogg could do was stare in utter disbelief
of how easy it was for him to destroy ShenDogg.
Inside the main chamber...
"What?! That's impossible! My precious ShenDogg, defeated by somebody weaker
than him! Mechanicore, take the fights downstairs, it's time to awaken Achinarak,"
"Yes, master," Mechanicore said, turning around and walking down a hallway
that led to the arena. When he got there, he stopped at the edge of the hallway.
"You fools may have destroyed ShenDogg, but you won't defeat me again,"
he said, as he jumped into the arena. Then, he slammed his fist down, and the
stone ring cracked, and began to shatter under Boomdogg's feet. Mechanicore
began to float up, and waited for Boomdogg to drop like a stone. Boomdogg had
learned a new trick recently. He had learned how to fly, too. He smirked, and
then began to float. Mechanicore and Boomdogg began an aerial battle. They went
into a grapple like when Boomdogg fought ShenDogg, and since they were floating,
there was no stronger warrior.
"Go Boomdogg!" Kentan shouted. He had never before seen Zing-Lau, Mechanicore
or ShenDogg, and since we destroyed Spectre, Toro, Skull Ptero, Vipor, and destroyed
The_Unborn_Beast, he had never seen them, either. But I'm sure Chao and Evanda
told him about them. Boomdogg and Mechanicore left the grapple, and started
throwing rapid punches at each other. Mechanicore hit Boomdogg in the head,
and axe-handled him down to the next floor, which was where a steel ring was
waiting. Boomdogg was being mutilated, but we all knew he wasn't doing his best.
I turned around. I couldn't stand to watch the fight anymore. I looked out the
doorway, and saw MagnaShoyru18 as he came in the open doorway to Zing-Lau's
"Magna, what are you doing here?" I asked him.
"I came here to battle Zing-Lau," He told me.
"You're a little early," I said.
I turned back around, and saw Boomdogg come flying up from the ring one floor
"It's your turn," Chao said, trying to get Boomdogg to drink some Pale Elixir.
Boomdogg was unconscious, and he had landed on our little ledge.
"Erm... I don't think I'll win," I said, looking down at the ring. Mechanicore
was staring up at us with his arms crossed.
"Rider, if you go down there and fight, I'll help you by throwing down powered
up energy vials. But, you'll need 3 vials for a full attack charge. If the third
one you get is red, you'll be able to throw fireballs for a few seconds, if
it's green, your punches will explode for a few seconds, and if it's blue, you'll
get super speed for a few seconds. Good luck," Magna said to me. I must
admit, the idea of my attacks being supercharged did boost my confidence, so
I jumped down into the ring.
"Mechanicore, you'll be feeling a lot of pain in a little while," I told
him. His straight face cracked into a smirk, and he let his arms fall to his
"You fool! Didn't you see how easily I defeated Boomdogg?" he asked me. Magna
had just thrown down at least seven vials, and Mechanicore had no idea. I ran
behind him and grabbed two green ones, and a blue one. I charged at Mechanicore
and rammed him while I had the blue energy flowing through me. He shot across
the arena, and into the wall. He bounced off, and landed on one foot back in
"Did you really think it would be that easy to defeat me?" he asked. His mouth
was bleeding, but he didn't bother to wipe it off. I tried to rush him again,
but he disappeared when I was just about to ram him. I turned around, and there
he was, holding three red vials. He tossed them all into his mouth, and began
to punch the ground. Every time he did, a fiery shockwave would go in all directions
away from him. Magna threw me two blue vials, and one red one. I took the blue
energy first, and then the red. I threw fireballs at Mechanicore as fast as
I could, and the only one that hit him was one I threw just as he had stopped
running from them. It had just barely managed to clip him in the arm. He grabbed
three blue vials that were on the way down. When he took in the energy, spiked
balls started zipping around him, and he chased me around until his power-up
"That was too close," I said to myself, trying to keep my distance from
Mechanicore's attacks. Magna threw me three green vials, and I took in every
ounces of energy that was in them, ran up to Mechanicore, and punched him in
the face. The explosion the power-up had caused was so powerful, we both went
reeling, but Mechanicore shot out of the ring, and into the surrounding lava.
He was flailing helplessly as he sank to his demise. And when he was enveloped
by the lava, we all knew he was a goner just like ShenDogg.
To be continued...
Next time on Doomsday Rider III, Zing-Lau finally awakens Achinarak, and unleashes
him upon our heroes, and just when Achinarak is thought to be down and out, Zing-Lau
restores his strength! And when Achinarak finally is defeated again, Zing-Lau
launches the final rush, and our heroes must all fight Achinarak and Zing-Lau
at once in order to save Neopia.