Main Page Go to Short Stories Go back to Articles Go to Comics Go to Continued Series Go to Editorial Go to New Series

Show All | Week 1 | Week 2 | Week 3 | Week 4 | Week 5 | Week 6 | Week 7 | Week 8 | Week 9 | Week 10 | Week 11 | Week 12 | Week 13 | Week 14 | Week 15 | Week 16 | Week 17 | Week 18 | Week 19 | Week 20 | Week 21 | Week 22 | Week 23 | Week 24 | Week 25 | Week 26 | Week 27 | Week 28 | Week 29 | Week 30 | Week 31 | Week 32 | Week 33 | Week 34 | Week 35 | Week 36 | Week 37 | Week 38 | Week 39 | Week 40 | Week 41 | Week 42 | Week 43 | Week 44 | Week 45 | Week 46 | Week 47 | Week 48 | Week 49 | Week 50 | Week 51 | Week 52 | Week 53 | Week 54 | Week 55 | Week 56 | Week 57 | Week 58 | Week 59 | Week 60 | Week 61 | Week 62 | Week 63 | Week 64 | Week 65 | Week 66 | Week 67 | Week 68 | Week 69 | Week 70 | Week 71 | Week 72 | Week 73 | Week 74 | Week 75 | Week 76 | Week 77 | Week 78 | Week 79 | Week 80 | Week 81 | Week 82 | Week 83 | Week 84 | Week 85 | Week 86 | Week 87 | Week 88 | Week 89 | Week 90 | Week 91 | Week 92 | Week 93 | Week 94 | Week 95 | Week 96 | Week 97 | Week 98 | Week 99 | Week 100 | Week 101 | Week 102 | Week 103 | Week 104 | Week 105 | Week 106 | Week 107 | Week 108 | Week 109 | Week 110 | Week 111 | Week 112 | Week 113 | Week 114 | Week 115 | Week 116 | Week 117 | Week 118 | Week 119 | Week 120 | Week 121 | Week 122 | Week 123 | Week 124 | Week 125 | Week 126 | Week 127 | Week 128 | Week 129 | Week 130 | Week 131 | Week 132 | Week 133 | Week 134 | Week 135 | Week 136 | Week 137 | Week 138 | Week 139 | Week 140 | Week 141 | Week 142 | Week 143 | Week 144 | Week 145 | Week 146 | Week 147 | Week 148 | Week 149

Neopia's Fill in the Blank News Source | 27th day of Awakening, Yr 23
The Neopian Times Week 124 > Continuing Series > Dark Flame: Part Sixteen

Dark Flame: Part Sixteen

by child_dragon

There was a deafening explosion as power raced through the tunnel walls and ceiling. The ground below my feet shook but I held firm. The tunnel entrance crumbled and then collapsed. Stones rained down and smashed into the earth with shocking force. For a moment I was scared I'd overdid it but the collapse slowed and then stopped. The tunnel was suffused with dust and I coughed as I breathed it in. I had to get back. Still coughing, I staggered away, pulling my spear out of the solid stone.

     I met back up with the group at the next bend in the tunnel.

     "That should hold them," I gasped, trying to wipe the dust off my face and hair.

     It was a lost cause. I gave up and took the lead with Sabreur, quickening our pace to put distance between us and the shaft.

     "Where are we going?" Netsuko asked.

     "Don't know. Just trying to loose anything."

     "Why did the shaft end so suddenly?"

     "Again: don't know. I guess the earth tried to seal Aldrai away. Anyway, we've got to get some ground between us and those Korbats before we can stop."

     No one argued with my plan. We kept moving, pressing on. Our pace didn't allow for as careful travel as before and as a result several of us wound up stumbling and almost falling as the tunnel floor changed.

     "What were those things anyway?" Melody asked fearfully.

     "Korbats, I think," I replied, "Korbats that have never seen the sun."

     "The Infernals," Sabreur said in a strange voice.

     The name seemed to resound around us, an ominous sign of what we were up against.

     "This is bad, isn't it?" MoonFall asked in a tiny voice.

     "Perhaps. Depends on what else we find down here."

     We didn't stop moving for about the next hour. Finally Sakuko demanded a halt and everyone slumped to the stone floor gratefully. I stayed near the entrance to the small cave area we were in, stretching my magic to detect anyone coming. There was nothing. That still did not reassure me though, as I had felt nothing when the Korbats had attacked. These things must've found some way to shield themselves from magical detection.

     "So where do we go now?" Terraile finally asked.

     "I don't know. We're off the map," my brother replied.

     I frowned and picked up one of the light threads burrowing deep into the earth, left from Aldrai's flight.

     "I think we'll just have to do this blind," I said thoughtfully, "Take whatever cave goes deeper into the earth and hope we can get close enough. If worse comes to worse I'll start blowing stuff up."

     Sabreur beamed at me proudly.

     "I trained you well," he said, wiping away an imaginary tear.

     "Oh, come off it," I replied irritably and stood, gathering up my backpack and spear.

     I was in the lead now. I used my magic like a compass, blindly following the light strand deeper into the underground. We ran into many dead ends and false starts but we were making progress. The air grew steadily warmer and more humid.

     "That underground lake," Sabreur murmured.

     I nodded in agreement and kept going.

     We finally stopped for the night in the most defensible cavern we could find. Sabreur chose our sleeping spots for us this time, with me at the most vulnerable entrance.

     "Keep a sharp eye," he ordered everyone as we drew for watches, "we don't know what might come."

     It took a long time to get to sleep. My wings ached from the mad freefall battle and I was still feeling the strain of following Aldrai's thread. The task before us seemed impossible. Find a way to wherever Aldrai was while avoiding the Infernals. But I could not give up on my pet. Not now, not ever.

     I eventually drifted into a fitful sleep. My dream was dark and instinctively I knew this was more than just a dream.

     "Shi'tri!" I called. "You're there, I know it."

     "My, aren't we the clever one," he said, appearing before me with a satisfied smile.

     "Can it. What else is down here besides the Infernals?"

     "Oh, so you've found the Infernals then, have you?"

     "Yes. They attacked us. What else is down here?"

     He studied his nails thoughtfully and appeared to be debating on what to tell me.

     "I'm warning you…"

     "Warning me?" he said in mock fright. "You don't even know who or what I am!"

     I growled low in my throat and flexed my Kougra claws.

     "Oh very well, no need for violence."

     He sighed.

     "I did warn you to turn back. There is no hope for Aldrai. But, if you insist… You do have the Infernals to deal with. They don't like outsiders although they are not entirely unreasonable. You also have some darker things, left over from when Neopia was still a very dangerous place. They make your above ground evils look like child's play. I'd suggest you avoid them at all cost."


     "Stay away from dark places," he said cryptically, "Now, there's the usual dangers of traveling underground… poisonous gases trapped in caverns - you're lucky you haven't found those yet - the underground lake has a tendency to flood some tunnels and caves depending on the time of day, and ah yes, supposing you do make it past all that, you'll have to face the Guardians."

     "The Guardians?" I asked dumbly.

     "You've fought them before. Or are you so dense that I have to spell it out for you?"

     My mind reeled. Surely not…

     "Wait," I said, "Shi'kly. Shi'tri. You're… you're…"

     "The physical embodiment of the element of darkness. Precisely," he said, folding his hands behind his back and giving me a small bow.

     I gasped and staggered away from him.


     "Think about it," he said coldly, "I was able to enter your mind while you were in a coma simply because you were in darkness. From there you've allowed me access to your dreams when you sleep."

     "I - I have?"


     "Get away from me," I snarled.

     "I daresay I shan't. In case you forget I've been trying to help you."

     "Oh, yeah right," I said sarcastically, "trying to get me to turn back. Sending those Infernals after us. And besides, your best attribute is lies."

     "I had nothing to do with that," he retorted, "and my best attribute is not lies, although that is a part of what I am. I am mostly concerned with my own selfish interests. And keeping you alive as the Essence of Neopia just happens to be in my own self-interest right now. Never before has my very existence been threatened and thankfully you were able to stop that. I expect you to continue to protect Neopia - and me -- in such a way for many years."

     "Then why are you keeping me away from Aldrai?!"

     "My, you are a dense one," he marveled. "If you can't figure it out on your own then I'm not going to spend all night explaining myself. By the way, you might want to look to your friends. Since you will not heed my warning we have been forced to take drastic measures."

     "Wait! What…?"

     But he was gone.


Look to my friends. What on Neopia did that mean…? I struggled to wake but it was like moving through molasses. What had Shi'tri done to me? I could not wake. And I felt his presence behind it all. I sank into dreamless sleep.

     I woke. I was bound, my hands pulled behind my back and tied to a wooden pole. My ankles were also bound together. I shook my head and opened my eyes. My friends were all arranged nearby, similarly bound in a semicircle. Sabreur was to my right, a cut on his forehead.

     "You're awake," he said dully.

     "Wha-what happened?" I gasped.

     "We were attacked in the night. It was Infernals, lots of them, and not just Korbats. And you wouldn't wake up."

     "It was Shi'tri," I said darkly, "He's the guardian of darkness. The one I fought in the realm of the Shadows."

     "What's he got against you?" Sabreur asked, astonished.

     "I don't know. But he's bound and determined to not let me get near Aldrai."

     "I thought the guardians were just the physical manifestations of the different elements. They have a mind of their own?"

     "Obviously. Don't you think they're human though - they most certainly are not."

     I gazed around us. My friends showed various signs of combat and I frowned. Un-eairkagh was slumped to the side, apparently still unconscious. Infernus was breathing with difficulty and I guessed a broken rib or two. After I had inspected my friends I looked around our surroundings.

     We were by the underground lake. It stretched out into darkness, a flat surface of pure black. The cavern was enormous, the ceiling stretching up into nothingness. Light emanated from clumps of lichen and moss that glowed with a pale green light. All around us were tents and the occasional small campfire. Pets moved around us, pale furless creatures with huge distended eyes and ears. I shuddered. The Infernals. Pets lost to the underground, never seeing the light of day.

     "What do they want with us?" I whispered to Sabreur.

     "I have no idea. They just ambushed us in the night. We did quite a good job fighting them off though. Especially Infernus. It took seven of them at once to finally drag him down."

     I detected a note of pride in his voice and smiled grimly. A movement of white in our direction caught my eye. A Techo was walking our way, a hunched creature with skin stretched so tightly across its frame that you could see the veins underneath. A massive collection of necklaces made of shells hung on its emancipated frame and bracelets rattled on its ankles and wrists. It wore a tattered loincloth and a head-dress of leather and shells. A twisted wooden staff embedded with shards of glass was clutched in one bony claw.

     "Betcha ten to one this is the shaman of whatever culture they have down here," I whispered as the creature approached us.

My brother nodded slightly. The Techo stopped in the middle of the semicircle we formed and      glared at us in turn. A small crowd of the Infernals was growing around us and out of it stepped a massive furless Kougra flanked by two Gelerts. The Kougra walked up to stand by the Techo, the Gelerts staying a respectful distance behind, like an honor guard.

     "Chief," I whispered to my brother.

     "Intruders!" the shaman hissed, glaring at us, "Intruders into the sacred grounds of the Infernals!"

     "Are these the ones that were foretold?" the Kougra said in a deep voice.

     "Yes… I have seen them in my dreams. The elements have warned of their coming. They are not to pass! Kill them!"

     "They have done no wrong," the chief replied languidly.

     The shaman shot him a poisonous glance. Right then I realized that some sort of power struggle was going on. I quickly thought on how to best exploit it.

     "They are intruders! We must not suffer them to live! The elements demand it! Kill them!" the shaman shrieked, waving his staff.

     "The elements commanded no such thing," I said evenly, "Shi'tri only wants us to turn back."

     The shaman turned to me, his eyes bugging slightly.

     "She dares claim to have spoken with the elementals…" he hissed in outrage.

     "Since when has someone other than the shaman speaking with the elementals been a crime?" the Kougra asked.

     I detected a soft smile on his furless muzzle and he favored me an appreciative glance.

     "How is it that you even know the elements?" I asked the shaman, "I thought normal people could not communicate with them. Only very powerful wizards can detect their presence, much less allow them to manifest in physical form. And I sense no magic in you."

     The shaman gaped at me like a fish and the chieftain chuckled.

     "So you've seen them in physical form," he said, duly impressed, "That's something our shaman here cannot claim."

     "I am their chosen voice!" he howled, shaking his staff ever harder, "I have journeyed to the Elemental Forge where the elements reside!"

     "So the deeper you go the closer you get to the elements," Sabreur said lazily, "That's interesting. Well, Kiddo here has seen them on the surface of the earth. Can you beat that?"

     The Kougra burst out into laughter then and smirked at the shaman.

     "No, I don't believe you can. Get on now, and remember who runs this clan."

     The Techo hesitated for a moment, then drew himself up violently and stalked away. The Kougra then turned his large pale eyes on me.

     "I am Chief Raitos. You have done me a small service today," he said gravely, "Ilk'nios has been causing trouble for years. That should keep him in his place for now. But the fact remains that you are intruders here and that the elements do not want you to continue on whatever quest you are on. You will be escorted to the surface by our warriors."

     He turned to go and the crowd surrounding us drew back. Suddenly I heard frenzied shouts from a tunnel leading out of the cavern.

     "Ni'cri! Almon duos frasi-ni! Kraim cios!"

     The frantic cry continued as the furless Acara neared us, panting. The crowd quickly drew back to allow him through where he collapsed at the chieftain's feet.

     "Ni'cri. Almon duos frasi-ni. Kraim cios."

     "Eios du?"


     The reaction was instantaneous. Gasps of fear rippled around the assembled pets and a babble of voices burst out.

     "SIRENE!" the Kougra howled and everyone froze.

     With the crowd settled the chief started barking out orders in their own language, almost too fast to follow. Pets started moving immediately, running to grab weapons and scattering throughout the cavern.

     "What's going on?" I called.

     One of the Gelert guards answered me.

     "A creature of the underground is coming," he said evenly, "You above-grounds have dealt with something similar before, I believe. We call it the kraim. You called it the Monoceraptor. They are very rare. We have not had one come to the village in eons."

     I turned and looked at the tunnel the Acara had come running out of.

     "Release me," I said softly.

     The Kougra chief turned to stare at me.


     "Release me," I repeated, "I'll fight it off. Might not be able to kill it, but I bet I can drive it away."

     "You are mad."

     "Perhaps. But if I succeed, I will have saved your village."

     "And what do you want in return?"

     "You release my friends. And I want you to take me to the Elemental Forge."

To be continued...

Previous Episodes

Dark Flame: Part One

Dark Flame: Part Two

Dark Flame: Part Three

Dark Flame: Part Four

Dark Flame: Part Five

Dark Flame: Part Six

Dark Flame: Part Seven

Dark Flame: Part Eight

Dark Flame: Part Nine

Dark Flame: Part Ten

Dark Flame: Part Eleven

Dark Flame: Part Twelve

Dark Flame: Part Thirteen

Dark Flame: Part Fourteen

Dark Flame: Part Fifiteen

Dark Flame: Part Seventeen

Dark Flame: Part Eighteen

Dark Flame: Part Nineteen

Dark Flame: Part Twenty

Dark Flame: Part Twenty One

Week 124 Related Links

Room for Two
Morphing Mishaps

by child_dragon

Neoschool of Nightmares: Part One
Torkkin followed Shadowcat as she peered into a dark classroom and bumped into her as she came to a quick stop, "Ow," grumbled Torkkin as he rubbed his beak, "what's the hold-up Shadowcat?"

by lunagirl52

The Zafara Assassin 4: Darkness and Light -- Part Eight
"I don't see why you just can't sleep with us Zarrel," he said. "I doubt anyone will come this way, and even if they did they would probably pass us by."

by meratocat

Search :
Other Stories

The Curse of the Dark Nova: Part One
It was a beautiful and quiet morning in the kingdom of Meridell and something very special was about to take place...

by dancepixie100

The Path to the Stars: Part One
"One… two… one, two, three…"

by buddy33774

Bart Mint Bart: Part Two
Who did that voice come from? Did I just imagine it? BattlerJoe supposed it was possible.

by futureshrinksme

The Return of the Terrible Two: Part Two
"'Anyway, the second reason I'm contacting you is to ask you something. Would you… would you consider babysitting the twins again?'"

by bqueen6430

Neopets | Main | Articles | Editorial
Short Stories | Comics | New Series | Continued Series | Search